My Friend Moon

She is so beautiful
Everynight I see her in the sky
Her light makes me bright
Happiness of my heart gets to brim

Old friend of mine since I am four
Her white color looks like a snowflake
She is a coolly
That makes me a sweet cookie

Her humble smile inspired me
Flowed my creative pen
Made me strong
Took away my stress !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Enjoyed this descriptive and expressive write..Sara
Hales Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:33 AM
very nice write ..thank you for my comments sarah x
Imsong Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Such a tranquil n delightful poem!i enjoyed it thoroughly.Thanks for ur comments 2o,it feels good to be understood..and yes the person is suffering,worst of all she's losing her memory..
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