My Friend L

Liquor is a friend

that becomes an enemy in the morn

Liquor is a friend

that helps satisfy you

and lets you utter "I'm not gonna drink anymore."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Allison Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 3:50 AM
thought provoking piece, Liquor is a friend to be taken in moderation, if its in excess it can become a killer or destroy lives, well penned piece CC hugs Jan xx
DiMino Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 3:48 AM
:) You are learning. Well said. Been there. 75 now. Survived. Blessings.
Sarikova Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Much love and blessings! Take and thanks for the comment.
Leffanta Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Liquor is an hint, i.e., she will be much happier if you lick her! Aloha!
Sarikova Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Haha!
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