My Friend - I Miss You Backwards Contest

I miss you so...
Wordless... I miss you
without you I'm uninspired
a mute, my voice is truly yours
Speechless, numb, and empty

whats sometimes hard to show
that which I cannot say
I hope you feel it, I pray you know
this bares no question
My friend without strings... I do miss you so

so confused about what to do
I'm unable to handle what's true
sometimes our reality is conflicted
I sit back and marvel in thoughts of you

**For Matt Caliri's "Write a Poem Backwards" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today. I totally enjoyed reading it Lay. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Lay this is super and so unique ..reads great both ways and nice notes on a friend.. good luck in the contest my friend.. cool one ..for competition..luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, with nice rhythm
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