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My Friend

I would have liked nothing better than to lie with with you, my friend. Not out of love, but admiration for the depth and beauty of your soul. Not out of love, but in gratitude for arousing a waning thirst for life. And, yes, I would have liked nothing better than to lie with you for passions sake alone, but Fall and Winter’s mismatched roads must needs diverge to nothing more than affable affection. And so, I wept for you before you even knew you were going. I wept for Kismet’s sorrowful jest, for Time’s cruel and twisted hoax. And I wept for me, but then rejoiced that someone touched my soul

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Date: 10/19/2014 9:16:00 PM
Great poem, Gail. The honesty coming from your poetic pen was truly felt. The emotions of an intimate memory could be sensed from your words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 10/15/2014 9:20:00 PM
i got that feeling away back deep beautifully penned piece we are all friends
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Gail Roberts
Date: 10/15/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Liam. I am new to Poetry Soup and am still trying to find my voice.

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