My Friend

Laura, my bosom friend is charming- Lovely as the blooming lily of the lake Her presence is so calming- Laura, my bosom friend is charming Her manners are quite disarming She is by my side in every ache Laura, my bosom friend is charming Lovely as the blooming lily of the lake She is kind and God fearing Reaches out to everyone in need Seeking no reward, finds pleasure in serving She is kind and God fearing Her actions, her nobility confirming Frank and transparent in every deed She is kind and God fearing Reaches out to everyone in need Happy to have such a friend so caring A real treasure to be cherished Fights for justice with daring Happy to have such a friend so caring Laughs like bells pealing Through her presence, my life is nourished Happy to have such a friend so caring A real treasure to be cherished 25. Jan. 2022 Total No. of words- 154 Triolet Poetry Contest 160 words or less Sponsor- Caren Krutsinger
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:09:00 AM
What nice compliments to pay a friend. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and I hope you shared a copy with your friend. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2022 3:17:00 AM
Friends are priceless treasures. Your tribute to her says a lot about you Valsa. This is a wonderful entry for the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Valsa George
Date: 1/26/2022 3:46:00 AM
Yes, Connie.... ! Friends are priceless... ! Who said - "Forgive my avarice to hoard them" ? Friends alone can walk an extra mile with us ! Thanks for the compliment. Friends influence us so much that we tend to become like them.
Date: 1/25/2022 5:49:00 AM
This is lovely ode to a wonderful friend. Indeed good friends are like treasures to be cherished--- as you say, Valsa. All the best.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/26/2022 3:42:00 AM
Yes, indeed ! The encouragement from good friends like you is my motivation to write !
Date: 1/25/2022 2:49:00 AM
Lovely tribute to your friend Valsa. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 1/26/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tom.... ! I consider you to be my friend ! :)
Date: 1/25/2022 1:23:00 AM
Perfect triolet. I am more inclined to free verse. You have a charming friend. Let your friendship last. Best for a whim. Blessings.
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Date: 1/26/2022 3:40:00 AM
Friends are priceless treasures.... no doubt ! To have them in life is a blessing ! Be my friend dear Victor !
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