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My Forgotten Stars

My Forgotten Stars The sunlight shines A window breaks A shattered existence My body quakes The clouds cover As darkness nears A depressive insistence My unfought fears The moon arises Through stormy skies A-path-y's illuminated The journey of lies bmdavey@ 04/08/16

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Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2016 4:26:00 AM
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love the format Brian excellent write:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 6:59:00 AM
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Thanks Jan that means so much coming from you
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Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2016 1:54:00 PM
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Brian, the pathway of lies is a dark one, great write, super 7 ~
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 6:59:00 AM
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Thank you Constance and you are right it is a very dark path
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/10/2016 8:41:00 PM
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very different and very nice to read, Brian. I really enjoyed this one.
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 6:58:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea always love get a positive mark by you
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/10/2016 7:43:00 PM
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Very appealing poem, Brian. Janice
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 7:45:00 PM
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Thank you Janice I am glad you enjoyed it
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/10/2016 2:49:00 PM
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Excellent expression with beautiful style, drawn with sweet rhythm my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 7:45:00 PM
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Thanks BL and peace to you
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/10/2016 10:48:00 AM
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I like the flow of this poem.....beautiful piece..........A.M.
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 7:44:00 PM
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Thank you very much A.M.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/10/2016 9:05:00 AM
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well penned Brian, great rhyme and flow, deep and sad this truly is but hope your stars return soon!
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 7:44:00 PM
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Thank you Gordon

Book: Shattered Sighs