Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

My Forgotten Stars

My Forgotten Stars



  The sunlight shines
      A window breaks
          A shattered existence
              My body quakes

                  The clouds cover
                      As darkness nears
                          A depressive insistence
                              My unfought fears

                                  The moon arises
                                      Through stormy skies
                                          A-path-y's illuminated
                                              The journey of lies



                                                      bmdavey@
                                                       04/08/16

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Jan Allison April 13, 2016 at 4:26 AM love the format Brian excellent write:-) hugs jan xx Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 6:59 AM Thanks Jan that means so much coming from you

Constance La France April 11, 2016 at 1:54 PM Brian, the pathway of lies is a dark one, great write, super 7 ~ Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 6:59 AM Thank you Constance and you are right it is a very dark path

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2016 at 8:41 PM very different and very nice to read, Brian. I really enjoyed this one. Brian Davey April 13, 2016 at 6:58 AM Thank you Andrea always love get a positive mark by you

Janice Canerdy April 10, 2016 at 7:43 PM Very appealing poem, Brian. Janice Brian Davey April 10, 2016 at 7:45 PM Thank you Janice I am glad you enjoyed it

Bl Devnath April 10, 2016 at 2:49 PM Excellent expression with beautiful style, drawn with sweet rhythm my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Brian Davey April 10, 2016 at 7:45 PM Thanks BL and peace to you

Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 10:48 AM I like the flow of this poem.....beautiful piece..........A.M. Brian Davey April 10, 2016 at 7:44 PM Thank you very much A.M.

Gordon Mcconnell April 10, 2016 at 9:05 AM well penned Brian, great rhyme and flow, deep and sad this truly is but hope your stars return soon! Brian Davey April 10, 2016 at 7:44 PM Thank you Gordon