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My Foolish Heart

To feel foolish when used, becomes sadness when her glimmering glow smiled to convey and grew brighter when I found love's madness as trepidations and fears never outweigh the time we spent seemed an endless span and awakened passions of fiery blood kisses as many as the ocean's sand as fragrant as a flowering rosebud my heart's foolish pain is easy to find roses always die when plucked and thrown down and leave memories too fresh to unwind inside my heart, a lonely fool was found could that I look fondly upon those days she was so beautiful, her beauty stays 4/2/22 contest My Foolish Heart

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Date: 4/7/2022 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic!! Very touching and well-written poem! I love your phrase, "memories too fresh to unwind". Those 5 words can be applied to many situations in life! Congratulations on your win!! God bless and much love...Meghan!
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Date: 4/5/2022 2:07:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved placing in this competition.
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Date: 4/4/2022 10:59:00 PM
"kisses as many as the ocean's sand" - Wow! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations! Frederick for your placement in my contest.
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