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My Foolish Heart

My foolish heart; I had no clue that you could ever be untrue. Our time was great. You can’t deny together we were flying high! Why did you leave? What did I do? How did I ever misconstrue the way you felt? The man I knew would never want to see me cry. My foolish heart! When after all that we’d been through, I can’t believe you turned into a stranger! You became the guy who didn’t even say goodbye when always I’d been there for you. My foolish heart. Submitted Feb. 11, 2021 for My Foolish Heart Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 2/17/2021 12:16:00 AM
Wonderful form and an awesome write, Andrea:)
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:31:00 AM
Oh so love this wonderful piece. Will add to my fav. love phyl
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Date: 2/13/2021 11:20:00 PM
Just logged in when I got some time.. Andrea. This is sad... when someone we trust so much all of a sudden behaves indifferent like a stranger. A SURE winner in my mind. Best wishes dear. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/13/2021 9:29:00 AM
Wow, very emotive!! Heart becomes foolish when so much in love. Best wishes dear Andrea.
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Date: 2/12/2021 2:24:00 PM
I think that we often take love for granted. It takes two to tango (ok, it's a cliche, but it works for me!) This is an entry worthy of a high placement. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/12/2021 12:09:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Good luck in the contest. Hugs Darlene
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Date: 2/12/2021 10:23:00 AM
Good one for the contest. Way to go. The heart wants what it wants but sometimes it wants what is not the best for it. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2021 10:16:00 AM
This is gorgeous. Love it... God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/11/2021 7:15:00 PM
Nice one as usual, good rhyming EB
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Date: 2/11/2021 6:47:00 PM
Very nice poem, Andrea. You have a good rhyme scheme.
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