My Fondest Memory

MY FONDEST MEMORY
                     ("MY HOMETOWN - ODESSA, UKRAINE/MY FAVORITE PLACE")
I wake up to the crispness of the air
Nature is still
Outside the snow has formed into perfectly shaped mounds
The frost has framed the windows into decorative designs

Branches sway in a rhythmic pattern
There’s a stillness inside
My grandma is preparing bouillon and hearty beef stew
I look outside and catch the smiling rays of the sun dancing on the snow banks
Trees scrape the sky as they stand like an army line receiving its orders
There’s a comfort and familiarity in the air as the day is beckoning to start

Nature smiles
Winds sway in unison moving to the undulating rhythm of the atmosphere
I marvel at the tranquil scene as I immerse myself in a novel
The story takes me away to a far-away destination
I feel safe and content as I wrap myself in a cushion of comfort
I am at peace….




December 7, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/14/2016 2:31:00 PM
Home sweet home - what precious memories:-) hugs jan xx
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Alona Perlin
Date: 12/16/2016 2:51:00 PM
Yes, precisely. Thank you.
Date: 12/14/2016 12:28:00 PM
Ohhh, hometown is so special. All these smells, memories, colours and rhythms... Well done! Congratulations :)
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Alona Perlin
Date: 12/14/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 12/6/2016 2:23:00 PM
- A beautiful poem about your hometown, Alona .... visit other places are nice, but home is always the best place on earth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Alona Perlin
Date: 12/6/2016 2:25:00 PM
Thanks so much! East or west, home is best! :)
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