My Flower

roses are red this is true but they are also blue white, black, and lilac too many colors just for you and if our love is a rose then you are the flower blooming in every hour perfection from head to toes so like a rose love will grow This I will always know care for the seeds we sow so a harvest we will tow and if you are the flower then I will be the thorn to your protection sworn with all my might and power you are so full of kindness you are my happiness a cure for loneliness you hold a special fondness i hope you never forget we both are many things seeing what each day brings but in stone our love is set

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/4/2016 4:48:00 PM

Awesome write,,,,, welcome to poetrysoup :)

Ghost Party
Date: 3/7/2016 12:46:00 PM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2016 12:23:00 AM

Ruth,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ghost Party
Date: 3/2/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. I'm always up for criticism and looking for ways to improve as a poet. I will go read some of your poems as well and tell you what I think. I'll also check out the contest page and see if anything interests me. I look forward to being friends and feel lucky to be in such a welcoming community. -Ruth-