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My Flower

my flower my delicate orchid in the forest of my dreams shaded by tall trees that sway in tropic breeze and share the sun with you and your green leaves but it is your flowers colors that glow that irresistible glow that sunbeams display to the wild the pride and beauty this thing posses on a mountain high fancily dressed only for Gods eyes to see colors to attract a bee and carry it's pollen i hope to me so that with me you'll forever be

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Date: 12/21/2009 2:53:00 PM
Beautiful poem JHL, thank you ever so much for your kind comments on my poems >> James
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Date: 12/11/2009 7:31:00 PM
Ah love is in the air, romance, flowers, sunbeams, bees very romantic indeed. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/9/2009 1:49:00 PM
This is so beautiful John indeed,romantic and sweet,i like it and its going to my Favz..Charma:)
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Date: 12/9/2009 1:46:00 PM
Lovely... comparison to orchids .. great.. they are my fav flower... SOUP MAIL...
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Date: 12/8/2009 2:07:00 PM
pretty, enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 12/8/2009 1:22:00 PM
Conjures beautiful images of delicate orchids. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/8/2009 10:51:00 AM
A lovely image of the beautiful orchid and your desire to capture her, John! And it's good to see you writing love poems (for crying out loud -- lol). Much love and holiday cheer headed your way, Carolyn
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