My Flower

my flower
my delicate
orchid
in the forest 
of my dreams
shaded by 
tall trees
that sway
in tropic 
breeze
and share 
the sun
with you and 
your green 
leaves
but it is
your flowers
colors that
glow
that irresistible
glow
that sunbeams
display 
to the wild
the pride
and beauty
this thing posses
on a
mountain high
fancily dressed
only for Gods
eyes to see
colors to
attract a bee
and carry it's 
pollen
i hope
to me
so that with me
you'll forever be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Beautiful poem JHL, thank you ever so much for your kind comments on my poems >> James
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December 11, 2009 at 7:31 PM
Ah love is in the air, romance, flowers, sunbeams, bees very romantic indeed. God Bless Phyl
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December 9, 2009 at 1:49 PM
This is so beautiful John indeed,romantic and sweet,i like it and its going to my Favz..Charma:)
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Lovely... comparison to orchids .. great.. they are my fav flower... SOUP MAIL...
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December 8, 2009 at 2:07 PM
pretty, enjoyed reading!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Conjures beautiful images of delicate orchids. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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December 8, 2009 at 10:51 AM
A lovely image of the beautiful orchid and your desire to capture her, John! And it's good to see you writing love poems (for crying out loud -- lol). Much love and holiday cheer headed your way, Carolyn
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