Greg Watson Poet Rhyme

My Flame

Two tonnes press on my heart,
To me a great load,
A weight that set the world apart
The weight fell and caused a spark and it glowed!

So now I am Different 
Completely Unique,
Free from Imprisonment 
Completely set free.

And with this heart set afire 
And the weight obliterated
Nothing to hard,or to dire
Because now my worries are exterminated!

But soon one day came a traveling breeze
And put out my brightened flame.
But I blew on it and Said "Please-
The more you try the more my heart stays the same!"

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Poet Destroyer A October 14, 2013 at 8:43 AM Greg, was hoping you would have a new one... enjoy your week...Linda

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2013 at 4:21 PM free from imprisonment is what I long for. Greg,, and wow...what an ending. .you can't blame some one for trying. ..thanks for the visit. ..hugs...linda Greg Watson October 9, 2013 at 4:44 PM No problem you are one of my faves!