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My Five Senses

Surrounded by a liquid, warm, I feel it soothing my new skin. My hands and feet move all around to touch these soft walls here within. I soon hear something calm and sweet that lulls me- and such comfort brings; a muffled voice that fills my ears; a lovely sound within that rings. This liquid has so many scents as I breathe with my mouth and nose. They all smell good; some wake me up and others make me want to doze. And now my taste buds come alive with all this soup that I drink in. So many flavors I can taste; this brand new sense, I now begin. There's something bright my eyes can see; though filtered, it is softly seen. This glow is new, eyes opened wide, right through my shell, I see the sheen. Here, in my Mama, I'll grow big, and soon will make my grand debut. My strong five senses are set up- and in her womb, they tested true. August 2, 2018 ~6th Place~ Contest: My Five Senses Sponsor: Viv Wigley Judged: 08/14/2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara, for your visit and lovely comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/16/2018 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/20/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/16/2018 4:37:00 PM
I like the idea you had to explore your senses from within the womb. Wonderful entry Sandra, congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/20/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Pixie Dust, for your visit and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/14/2018 5:34:00 PM
I love the wonderful direction you took your poem! So clever of you Sandra, to go to the cozy cocoon where each sense of wonder all began! Well done!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/15/2018 6:49:00 PM
Oh, Carrie, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your lovely, uplifting and supportive comments! I am pleased you enjoyed where I took the theme! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/14/2018 11:09:00 AM
'Fearfully and wonderfully made indeed' I really appreciated this unique take on the theme, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/15/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy. Your visit and comment are much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra :)

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