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Rain falls outside my window so softly, the grass, flowers and trees need it awfully, and I sit drinking tea listening calmly. Drip, drop and wind chimes whisper, and wind chimes whisper. In the distance the splash of cars on the road, yet, there is a silence and the world has slowed, I can taste a sweetness that will soon explode, Drip, drop and wind chimes whisper. Hidden in dripping branches - a bird twitter, looking closely I see it quiver and a wing flutter, then a chickadee appears to sing and chitter, Drip, drop and wind chimes whisper. There is a delicious smell in the hazy air, I breath it in without a worldly care, as raindrops are falling on my soaked hair, Drip, drop and wind chimes whisper. I touch the drooping garden flowers as I twirl, spinning in a glorious dance- I whirl, the why of nature flows into the soul of this girl. Drip, drop and wind chimes whisper, and wind chimes whisper. ____________________ July 25, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/My Five Senses Copyright Protected, ID 18-1045-880-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Five Senses sponsor, Viv Wigley Second Place

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Date: 9/14/2018 4:46:00 AM
Loved the poem a lot. Good work. A very worthy win. Best wishes, Reta.
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Date: 8/21/2018 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2018 6:53:00 AM
A lovely poem! It seems to me to be a mixture of several poetry forms which strengthens its elegance. Congratulations on 2nd place!
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:31:00 PM
Very beautifully expressed, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your Podium placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:59:00 AM
Although it is a hot summer day here in my hometown, for a moment I was sitting with you, feeling the dampness and cool air from the softly falling rain, ...wind chimes whispering in my ear, and feeling so refreshed! Thank you for sharing this lovely moment. Congrats to your top placement!
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats, Constance! Janice
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Date: 8/14/2018 7:29:00 AM
This is gorgeous, and the repeated "and wind chimes whisper" tie it all together. Congrats!
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Date: 8/14/2018 7:18:00 AM
The senses turned on, the music of rain and wind chimes and of course, your wonderful observations! Congrats on your win, Constance!
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Date: 8/14/2018 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement with this enchanting lovely poem Constance. : )
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Date: 7/28/2018 4:51:00 AM
The drip drop of this poem brings back so many fond memories of rain, you have made me homesick for some. My grass is brown and my flowers are sobbing. The muse and I are crying to give a bit of dampness to our day.
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Date: 7/25/2018 11:11:00 PM
Beautiful write and stunning picture, BW!
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Date: 7/25/2018 11:21:00 AM
Very lovely!
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