My First Poem

This is my first poem
were my emotions are shown
on the poetry soup -
I hope Im welcomed to the group. 

I really dont write much
and my spelling is bad as such
But I hope to learn
growing like a tree fern

So hopefully I can share
my family,my believe, my dare
to all you poet's
who dont even know it....

 If there's something you would like me to write about
Just give me a shout
and ill try to write you a poem
that will hit back home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 12, 2013 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for stopping by my work Michael, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 11, 2013 at 12:23 AM
I love this Michael - you've captured the hopes and fears poets experience when they first join the PS family. Very well penned!
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September 10, 2013 at 1:02 PM
thanks for sharing your first poem with us,your new poetry family,it is a pleasure to have you with us,keep writing,Ivy
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September 10, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Michael ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 10, 2013 at 9:15 AM
ps... you will do fine in all your writings.. stick with us 'here' at the soup. And your poetry will grow.. Just follow the poetry soup rules on the home page... I'm eager to read another one from you TODAY.. lol, if possible... xox...Linda
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September 10, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Hi Michael, i like your first poem.. My first poem on the soup's "WORDS."...lol.....mighty tacky,, but oh well.. :-),, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you AGAIN ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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