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My First Poem

I thought as hard as I could Of how I would my first poem begin But this I knew That once I put my pen to paper Then I could write a full book So I started to write With my eyes moving from left to right And a lot running through my mind People will hate it While some others, it will change their lives But this again I knew That behind the best lines are worst words too I hope it would be given a fair trial My heart couldn't hope for any better And at the end, you would say How I love to read this poem again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 2:22:00 PM
Okunsebor Williams :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Okunsebor Williams
Date: 1/9/2013 10:58:00 PM
thanks linda... Never knew poetry soup can be so nice.. I think there is my more that can be added to the cooking pot
Date: 9/19/2012 6:47:00 AM
I like the tone of this poem, and the heartfelt meaning expressed within.
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Okunsebor Williams
Date: 9/20/2012 2:57:00 AM
Thanks alot
Date: 2/26/2012 2:34:00 PM
Yours first poem is very well written Okunsebor.And WELCOME into PSoup!!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Okunsebor Williams
Date: 2/26/2012 3:06:00 PM
Thanks alot... How encouraging.

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