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My First Poem

At the edge of night I met you for the first time under starry sky. Time stopped for me in silence, rhythm of love flowed through me. Wrapped in silver dust, I soared with cadence of dream in your fervent sky. Lyrical breeze enticed me, wrote my first poem for you.

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Date: 12/15/2024 12:43:00 PM
So romantic. Congrats on this beauty
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Date: 12/7/2024 1:38:00 PM
You were caught up in the dreaminess…inspired a poem! Hugs ~ Kim
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2024 2:37:00 PM
Yes. Thank you for your read.

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