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My First Love

Once knew a lady, her name was Elizabeth Not a model or movie star but loved her to death We clicked from the start She twisted my heart And squeezed out the love, was a total damn mess!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/19/2017 8:29:00 AM
What a lovely affect Elizabeth had on you.. you big softie!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/19/2017 5:31:00 PM
Guess you could say that!!! lol
Date: 11/19/2017 8:12:00 AM
Two hearts clickled//love was tickled//revved up//full up//better than pigs feet pickled. (mo coffee please!) SQUEEZE ON CONFESSOR JACK!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/19/2017 8:28:00 AM
Awww sweet memories! Letting it all hang out today (so to speak)

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