My First Death

A drumming resonates with persistence.
A low and pleasant voice manifests in the distance-
As if in a dream, if it's real I can't be sure,
But bounds between awake and sleep are but a blur.

Only now am I aware of warmth and comfort once possessed,
Once my atmosphere evaporated,
Once the walls closed in all at once.

The more I struggle, the harder the walls push back,
With great force, they press down on my head, now sore and dizzy.
I hear the voice, once soothing now is screaming.

A panic ensues, unrestricted by time...

With one last shriek of pain and terror to extend, 
I break head first into a new dimension
Far beyond my comprehension
Is this my beginning or my end?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 30, 2013 at 12:49 PM
:-) WELL . . . kinda running out of compliments here, but lets just say I'm diggin everything I've read by you so far.
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