My First Date-Win

Flapping bosom beats Dauntless love sprinkled mind Recipe of passion Grins of pure high spirits Chatted, with hand in hand for time. Looked in her eyes, the doorway Leading up to her heart The place that is a soft sanctuary Like a butterfly our love settling Surprisingly on least expected bliss Then she was nigh, heard her sigh She, as sincere as spring poetry Felt soft red lips upon mine Tasted like drinking salty water Drank, drank and the thirst increased. The touch of delicate skin Each gentle move mesmerized me. This first date was to last for ages Anticipation spilled from her eyes That have enchanted me for years.
+++++++ Date: March 19, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: First Date by Frank H.
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March 30, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win... Nice First Date entry..... xox~ LINDA
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Dr. Ram!! ^__^
May Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Congrats Dr. Beautiful poem from the heart; free verse applied so fluently.// paul
Walker  Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Beautiful day-dreamer. Congratulations on the first place win... Verlena
Mahur Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:46 AM
Dear Sir, so sweet and heart touching poem to arouse hot passions in the beats. Thanks ! Please advice me by your loving comments.
Bisht Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Dr. Ram, that's appealing... Congrats :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Ahhh!!! Great passionate work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:34 AM
- Sweet memories ... Dr.Ram - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Richardson Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Enchanted you for years...a grand first date write.
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