My First Ball

As I walk through the doors of the hall,
I am swept off my feet by such flare.
When I think that tonight’s my first ball,
How I blush thinking thoughts I don’t dare.

Lovely music pours out of the room,
And my hips sway beneath my pink gown.
Mom’s eyes seek a potential bridegroom
Dad’s eyes stop, my swaying with a frown.

Ushered in the big room my eyes dance
As they rush over grandeur so bright
Chandeliers they brought over from France 
Fill the room bringing splendour and light

On the sidelines I can’t help but stare 
Pretty walls lined with roses and vines
Sweetest scents of Guerlains fills the air
As the ladies and gents sip their wines.

Fine madam’s gowns blend in with the walls
And the heavenly ceiling divine 
Pastel angels and blue waterfalls 
Someone begs me to dance just in time.

As we twirl on the dance floor I’m charmed
Looking into his eyes, I turn red
And I’m weak in this young man’s strong arms
Looking up angels spin round my head.

All too soon my first ball has to end
Sweetest dreams I shall cherish tonight
When I think of my newly found friend 
Just the thought of him brings such delight


Anapest Trimeter

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.27.2014
Sponsor Isaiah Zerbst
Contest: Ballroom Delights 
1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:49 AM
congrats on fine win Brenda perfectly captured I remember in my late teen gate crashing a ball at a famous Park Lane hotel soon asked to dance I found out he was a policeman and so where my next two partners in horror I realised I had crashed the police ball and beat a very hasty retreat lol hugs 7
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Hi Brenda, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Taylor Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Nice descriptive poem Brenda, probably bringing memories back of many peoples' first disco / ball / prom / dance
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Thanks Julia.
Gasun Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Warmest congratulations on your well-deserved topmost win my dear friend, Brenda. I extremely loved and enjoyed your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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December 22, 2014 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Leonora.
Macfarlane Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Beautifully written, was a delight to read. Big congrats on an excellent win and write! Hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Cecilia.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Swinging back to offer high praises for your well-deserved first place win! Congratulations, Brenda - bravo!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so much Pandita
Richards Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Well done, Brenda !!! Hooray for your win!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Thanks so much Carrie.
May Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Great write and win Brenda...congrats..
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. So well deserved!
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:30 PM
There is nothing you can't do my darling Brenda. I am so proud to call you friend. A Fav. Love You!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Thanks so much for your support Maurice.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:14 PM
wow way to go Brenda your delicious descriptions are wonderful, Congratulations on a well deserved win
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Thank you Robert.
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:38 PM
This is Gold,worthy of first place; thank goodness for the gift of poetry Brenda...congrats on the win that equates reward with effort...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much for all your support Kayod5
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Hi Brenda, I am so happy to see your beautiful ballroom poem at the top of the winner's list! I knew it would be a winner the first time I read it. And Yes, so wonderful to share the podium with you and Jan! Huge congratulations to you! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Wow! Brenda...such ballroom delights in this lovely write of yours!! Young love waiting to blossom! Congrats on your lovely win. // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Paul, I'm really glad you like it.
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:46 AM
So pleased to see this do so well lovely to read it again - congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:27 PM
I am dancing with delight:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thanks so much and congratulations on your beautiful poem.
Zerbst Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Smooth anapest, and the poem is so beautifully enchanting! Thanks so much for your wonderful contribution.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Wow, thank you so much Isaiah. I worked really hard on this one to get it just right. I am so happy you like it.
Haight Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Brenda, this is such a great poem with that waltz feeling in your meter and wonderful descriptive imagery of the setting and actions taking place at the ball! Good luck in the contest! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Beautiful ball room write, Barbara. The imagery is just delightful!Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 9:47 PM
Oops - so sorry Brenda, about the typo above. Please forgive the error:-)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Thanks Pandita, I'll let her know. ;-).
Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:40 PM
With three daughters, I was your dad in the poem . . . to much fun going on here!! Loved the poem . . .
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:30 PM
LOL Thanks David.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I believe that you have got the shoe, shoe, boot down really well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Thanks Sara
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 3:50 PM
so beautifully penned Brenda - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Thank you Jan
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:32 PM
- A truly beautiful memory - Young and in love ..... Beautiful poems, Brenda! - I wish you luck in the contest - ..... and a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Anne Lise
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:17 PM
7 So beautiful, the canvas is outstanding. Good luck in the contest Brenda .
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Eve.
Arrow Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Such a beautiful night Brenda... C/A
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Thanks Cupid
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