My First Acrostic

T-ake my hand sweet doll,
R-un with me,till we are
O-n our way to love spot.
U-ntill the sun goes down
B-enders of time we be
L-oving eachoda without
E-nd till we turned to mist





Note: 
Iwas moved by different 
attempts some wonderful 
poets made. It spurred 
me into action.
Hope It was well penned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 27, 2013 at 12:17 AM
Hi Bob, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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October 16, 2013 at 2:32 PM
This was a beautiful acrostic poem! You did a great job on your first attempt! Nicely done!...The first acrostic that I had ever written, actually ended up winning first place in Andrea's recent contest!...So, I have learned to not underestimate myself, and you shouldn't either!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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October 7, 2013 at 3:57 AM
- Your first acrostic is really beautiful! - I visit you early yesterday ... would see if you had written one - but you had not posted it then. - Well done, Bob! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 6, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Your first Acrostic is well pinned. Love it, trouble is still my middle name..LOL... love this one I Bob.,,, always~ Linda
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