My Firend's Love
He want to see the sweety
she said come with rose
He searched for the beauty
But he didn't get, he lose
He cried a lot
He searched a lot
He worried a lot
And come with tears a lot
Lastly he see a rose
He didn't lose
he come with dream
And with neam
He see she dance with
His friend with his faith
his love is broken
and his heart also broken
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