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My Firend's Love

He want to see the sweety she said come with rose He searched for the beauty But he didn't get, he lose He cried a lot He searched a lot He worried a lot And come with tears a lot Lastly he see a rose He didn't lose he come with dream And with neam He see she dance with His friend with his faith his love is broken and his heart also broken

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Date: 10/21/2017 1:04:00 PM
I do not know either Ananthasagaran,I only know the words you wrote are beautifully written. This is a beautiful written sad poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 10/21/2017 7:49:00 PM
Thank-you my dear friend. Your positive comments make me happy. Read my all poems and comment.
Date: 1/22/2016 7:55:00 PM
Ananthasagaran,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 2/18/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thanks, Skat
Date: 10/24/2015 2:27:00 AM
please tell some ideas for me
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