My Final Fate

I often sit and ponder,
where will my soul go,
when my time has come,
am I going to Hell,
or heaven where it's fun.

Who will judge me,
can I still repent,
or is judgement over,
my souls been spent.

This for sure,
my body waits,
for someone coming.

To decide,
my final,

fate.

M.Mahauariki © 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 18, 2012 at 1:34 PM
mmmm needs more work I think, bit rough for a first go at this style.
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