'my Field of Dreams'

In my field of dreams I see you Walking towards me With that smile on your face With promise and hope in your eyes Somehow your reflection has gone dim My hope at times too But Then I remember the life you lived It was all about hope All about not giving up Never forgetting to smile That will always remain – A bittersweet memory Times like tonight you are so close by Not physically But I can feel your breathe against my skin I can feel the warmth of your touch It’s not in the things you said, It’s in the way you did them Even when I miss you The most Still, I am thankful I was blessed with you Even if just for a little while
27/11/2012 ©271120121430

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/4/2015 8:41:00 AM
A wonderful write. I see that it has been a winner, and well deserved at that.
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Date: 9/30/2015 7:01:00 AM
Hi Wilma: A beautiful poem with the feeling of Love.
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:42:00 PM
Wilma - what a touching poem you have written here. I lost my husband 5 years ago and can so relate to every word - this will be going into my fav list. Well done on your winning write and many congrats for it's feature this week. Janette
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Date: 6/10/2015 4:18:00 PM
A most touching write from you Wilma, best wishes on the great placement and Gods blessing..'
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:47:00 AM
Wilma. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 5:08:00 AM
beautifully penned such a touching write - many congrats on your win Wilma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:38:00 PM
so sad Wilma a touching poem congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 1/25/2013 5:06:00 AM
Wonderful poem, written with love.
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:14:00 PM
This dedication is so tenderly, lovingly written. I sometimes feel lost loved one's so near. Though the body leaves our presence... the love never leaves our life.
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Date: 12/30/2012 7:18:00 AM
A most gracful write Wilma; really well Done I extend good new year wishes Across the miles and seas, may Gods Blessing be with you.."
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:41:00 PM
A bittersweet poem indeed and going to.my favs..it gave me goosebumps.
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Date: 12/4/2012 3:31:00 PM
truly wonderful dedication, this is lovely...
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Date: 11/29/2012 11:41:00 AM
You have written such a heartfelt poem here, Missy-- it really shows how much he means to you, and I find it so beautiful how this transcends death-- bittersweet indeed, especially knowing when he passed away... he sounds so special and you were both blessed... thanks for sharing this touching write.. mwahugs!
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Date: 11/27/2012 4:59:00 PM
wow, an amazing poem to remember your friend by. I really enjoyed this one, Wilma. Such friends stay with us forever.
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Date: 11/27/2012 3:59:00 PM
What a phenomenal write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tonight! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
Beautiful write Wilma...I'm sure your love is still felt. <3
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Date: 11/27/2012 11:25:00 AM
It is so beautiful written Wilma, but still so touching that anyone can cry. Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2012 7:19:00 AM
This is lovely Wilma xx
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Date: 11/27/2012 7:19:00 AM
It is always such a pleasure reading your flowing free verse!! jag
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Date: 11/27/2012 6:58:00 AM
Wilma a wonderful dedication to your friend...I hope you are well and it's nice to read your work again....David
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