My Ferry Trip

Diamonds dancing upon the waters
I see the giants lining up along the shore line
some dipping
as if thirsty
into the sparkling waters

I see birds
wings spread wide to catch the breezes of the spinning earth
and watch them soar
in search of sustenance

I smell the salt laden air
that permeates every pore of my skin
and I feel taken away

to be alive is to experience
with all our senses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 15, 2008 at 4:25 PM
i enjoyed your poem - I liked the way you described things and how it all concluded
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