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My Feet

feet are getting old
thread veins wrinkled calloused skin
taking me with them

Copyright © Viv Wigley | Year Posted 2018

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January 17, 2021 at 1:51 PM

Been a while; how are you Viv?

August 14, 2018 at 5:50 PM

Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

July 12, 2018 at 9:21 PM

Incredible how you put so much feeling into three lines! I like your poems! :)

July 9, 2018 at 9:40 AM

So right you are. Since long feet are carrying me. Well thought.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 9, 2018 at 3:31 AM

A senryu many of us can relate to Viv! It is great to be reading your poetry tonight. : )

Charles Messina

July 7, 2018 at 6:25 AM

We've walked a million miles at our ages...excellent, Viv!

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2018 at 2:26 PM

OH My, the feet now too? I am appalled to see the spider veins in my upper thighs. Good grief!!! Good one, Viv.

July 1, 2018 at 1:27 PM

Incredibly clever Viv

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 1, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Witty relatable pen! xomo :)

July 1, 2018 at 7:30 AM

Getting on in years sucks, when I reach 70 I'll opt for a total body transplant of a twenty year old.

Mystic Rose Rose

July 1, 2018 at 5:33 AM

I love my feet and I thank them each day for taking me places. I am glad you wrote about feet today, Hope all is well, have a good day Viv.

July 1, 2018 at 3:25 AM

oh you've seen mine then mr Viv lol :-) hugs Jan xx

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