Anonomus Scorpio Poet Rhyme

My Feelings Kept No Scores

My heart without you would only know poverty
I have no starvation, though, for I covet thee
My soul without you would die of thirst
This cup is full of every drink better than the first
My eyes never seeing you would wish for blindness over sight
Luckily, my vision is consumed with your never-ending light
My hands would be broken had they never held one of yours
With every touch given and reciprocated my feelings have kept no scores

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Paige Hind June 13, 2023 at 11:55 AM A beautifully written poem of love! You sure do well with your rhyming. Anonomus Scorpio June 13, 2023 at 4:35 PM I blame the muse for my rhymes :) With Warmth A.S.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 10, 2023 at 3:48 PM You do do romantic so well, that first line alone is swoon worthy. xomo Anonomus Scorpio June 11, 2023 at 7:57 AM I do not know what my life would be like if I could not see love in everything the way that I do. I have so much love for the people I've met and had the privilege to read from this site. With a big smile A.S.

Bill Baker June 10, 2023 at 2:23 PM A lovely love poem, Anonomus. Love can be wonderful and overwhelming. Write On my friend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Anonomus Scorpio June 11, 2023 at 7:53 AM Thank you very much Bill! I am curious are you anywhere near Houston? If you are send me a soup mail I happen to be traveling in that direction in the near future would love to grab a coffee with you sir! Regards A.S.