My Feeling of the Fallin

as you go back in there and makeing the point  heard  what you come to say is .
As I stand here thinking there's no more screaming,  but most of all no more blood spilling of our loved ones.

But same time congratulating the surviving, and tears begin falling  for the  fallen. 

But as the living walk out of the war, getting back home, they get honoring and huge respects for defending their country. 

As some go  using as a excuse.  for there action filling  their blues. 

But as we grieve over fallen loved one's, we embrace the flag's image and meaning, which comes to be as  becoming a solider and defending the country, the land of the free, and home of the brave.

We shall conquer if we must, when our cause is just. 

but as others  rely on no kind of trust, only power and making the country full of  cowards.  

As living with  no trust or ruling, it puts a wrong impression of those who  have fallen, bringing out a view that their death meant nothing.  

But as they fall or crawl, their name is respected, glamoured, unlimited praise.

Every time the flag is raised, shall be given and praised when brought to saying.  

All the flags will forever  stay flying, symbolizing this  is land of the free, home of the brave, ready to unite and fight at any time, making the pain flee from our country.

So we need to give our military praise and  comfort as they survived the darkest times. 

As we give plenty of our thanking and gratitude that they're back home to  hold you.

But as time passesthey begin the  a relaxen.as

They  start to feel the effect on surviving, their lives that they gave  to defend our country  and still surviveing to tell there tell.

 as they hit the airport floors  the crowd begins to roar in excitement and relieaf  in there liveing return.

but  we will not ever for get   to give thx for to  whom that have fallen 

not just that  but  give are praises and thanks   also comfort  of the familes of those sacraficeing  ther loved to keep freedom for all. 

just be thinking   the harder they fall the more the state rises not saying all falls stay at a crawl 

 but back to main fact as the sad lost gets over passed  not respeted for his or her doing  or should i say servings 

 but those  whove fallen and stayed to the ground  may be gone to others! but will all ways  be in our souls   power to  with stand and over come  the sorrow pain  the missiory
 that tried to  make us blinding  as we never dull  are stand at the gates of the usa

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