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It's a groovy morning in a simpletons ecstasy the rushing sea and waves and my appalling vessel what is my source a zephyr oh my anxiety what's the scene of the weak spot obviate strangulation everyone should be provided shelter for and you as well with me stay
Written: May 22, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

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Date: 5/23/2022 5:02:00 AM
A lovely start to your poem---the rushing sea and waves and my appalling vessel---sail on my friend on this poetic journey!
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