My Faze,Daze,Or Haze

The one I loved has left my heart broken he stands right there in my hands he says he loves me but his words seem hurt I’m lost in a daze it should of only been a faze or a haze why does this love hurt as I daze I think about you are you a true faze or is it part of my daze? I wish it was a reality and not this faze that’s part of my  daze why must I go through this day after day can’t stop thinking about our first time how you told me you loved me and I said I loved you to was it true or do you think I was just a faze as time flew by the time we had together was the best part of our daze, faze, or haze which ever I’m glad it was you that I fell in love with thank you I’ll always love and treasure you forever in my fazed daze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/21/2012 12:25:00 PM
stay fazed in your daze,love craze lol,nice write Kaitlyn
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:36:00 AM
Lovely poem Kaitlyn! Love your play of words -(faze, daze, haze, fazed haze)- you've brought out the theme very well.
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:13:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Kaitlyn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:01:00 PM
tender heart, tender words, a beautiful person emerges
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