My Favourite Place

Hey, helmeted heads and masked faces Just doff your boring accessories Come step into this secluded place Which makes your mundane minds go crazy On watery leaves, these little birds glide Roistering the plain sailing water ride There, the perky squirrels hoard fallen fruits Wandering here and there forgetting their route Butterflies here amaze us by their divine dance And sometimes they also give us a great chance Spins the enigmatic web, the signature spider Writes on all the edges, the welcome letter Look down and see the tiniest of tiny snails smile And in pursuit of wonders, I don't need to go miles

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Date: 12/21/2021 7:41:00 AM
This sounds an exotic place .... with the squirrels hoarding nuts, the spiders weaving gossamer nets and butterflies flitting around. We needn't travel long in search of great destinations when such lovely pockets of Nature are all around ! Enjoyed, Supraja !
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Date: 9/6/2021 8:34:00 AM
A wonderful place you took us. Awesome, Supraja. And thanks for the birthday wish!
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Date: 9/4/2021 8:37:00 AM
You took us to a journey to your favorite idyllic place through your descriptive pen dear Supraja... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
So lovely, descriptive, and expressive, Supraja. Janice
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Date: 9/3/2021 8:08:00 AM
What scenery is ever more pleasant than that which natures offer. Hugs.
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Date: 9/3/2021 5:42:00 AM
Enjoyed the hues of your favorite place, Supraja. Images take the reader to the scene you so well depicted.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/3/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much... So glad you liked it...
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