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Oh, how sublimely my hormones hurt At the sight of you in my favorite shirt Not once did I ever intend to share it 'Til my peepers eyed how well you wear it Oh, my, lordy knows I've a need, devout For the beguiling way that you fill it out At such divine form, I've no need to scoff Yet, you're finer, still ... when you take it ... Off. * FIRST PLACE in the "Epigram" Poetry Contest, Deborah Guenther Beachboard, Sponsor. *

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Date: 4/18/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with these delightful fun epigrams. Real winner!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/4/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, I'm so pleased that you liked it! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 1:15:00 PM
A sensual set of epigrams sprinkled with a touch of humour. Congratulations on placing first, Greg. Regards // paul
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:50:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Paul - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/16/2018 4:38:00 PM
Another well-deserved top win, Gregory. Amazing write! Congratulations on your trophy win. Sandra <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:09:00 AM
That's so sweet of you, Sandra, as always - thank you very much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 1:38:00 PM
A hot number indeed. Congrats on your gold medal finish, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:09:00 AM
Very kind of you, Line - thank you! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 1:00:00 PM
what a saucy little number! many congrats greg:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:08:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Jan - thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congrats Greg, well deserved win. Tom
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom! :-)
Date: 4/16/2018 12:47:00 PM
I remember THIS one ;) muchos congratulations <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:07:00 AM
Muchas gracias, Mo ... I so appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 10/7/2017 5:52:00 AM
Smooth and sensual write, Greg!! Well done. All the best, John.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/7/2017 6:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, John - I greatly appreciate the kind words! :-)
Date: 9/25/2017 3:48:00 PM
Now THAT is super cool, Gregory. I love this one. It reads fast and clever!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/25/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen - so pleased you enjoyed this fun little project! :-)
Date: 9/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
Delectable fun :) love this pen my friend xomo! My best to you for the contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/25/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen - this was a LOT of fun ... I enjoy these sexy little ditties! :-)
Date: 9/24/2017 8:21:00 PM
Very intriguing.......sexy!!! Hey....thanks for the wonderful comments..... You cant fool me... You're one to be reckoned with.. Superb paintings you sketch..... I See.......
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/25/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sir! Yes, I sketch, but I'm just a hack - my Mom and sister are artists of some renown, my mother mostly watercolors, my sis watercolors and pastels. I am a musician/recording artist first-and-foremost, (under my moniker), also a pharmacist and diamontologist, but I'm falling in love with writing poetry! Do you sketch, Rick?
Date: 9/24/2017 8:27:00 AM
Oh, Greg, you are being quite sentimentally sensual here my friend! What a delicate poem of vast proportions Those last few lines, oh my, I read that to my wife, and she smiled that special kind of smile to me, thank you my friend! I really enjoyed reading your romantic piece here this morning! What a fascinating write, Great Work!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/24/2017 6:14:00 PM
LOL - that's about the best comment ever, Brother ... I smiled wide when I read that your wife gave you "that" look, I was hoping it might have that affect on people! What a joyous and wonderful comment - thanks so much, my friend! :-)
Date: 9/24/2017 7:13:00 AM
Fabulously sensual with that cheeky ending, well written Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/24/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you VERY much, Elizabeth, I greatly appreciate your kind comment ... this one was a lot of fun! :-) <3
Date: 9/23/2017 8:45:00 PM
Wow ... Smile turning into grin ... And that too free of cost ... Great ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/24/2017 2:41:00 AM
Very kind of you, my friend, and so greatly appreciated - this was fun! Blessings, Probir! :-)
Date: 9/23/2017 8:09:00 PM
Oh my oh my oh my! What a saucy little ditty indeed. Enjoyed it immensely. ;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/23/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carole - so appreciated! :-)
Date: 9/23/2017 6:52:00 PM
Wow! Delicious and delicate, yet strongly sensual! I love this write Gregory, with it's short sexy lines, especially the first four.., and the last! What a way to end this delicacy. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/23/2017 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan - these sexy little ditties are so much fun! :-) <3

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