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My Favorite Flower

There is one 
   named Ring of Fire-

Of all the lovely flowers God has made,
there is one beauty that has touched my heart,
with petals marching round like on parade-

     and round
         a dark brown base,
            bright red-gold petals
               border well its rim.

A golden vision- a large center, shade
of brown and deep red hues- one work of art
of all the lovely flowers God has made-

      bright yellow lashes
         embellish enormous eye-
            sunflower beauty.

Most often lanky, long, a sturdy grade,
with graceful leaves attached that stand apart,
with petals marching round like on parade-

      like dancers
         swaying,
            flames aglow
               side by side-

Known as sunflowers, often seen arrayed
in fields and gardens, standing tall and smart,
of all the lovely flowers God has made-

      flames aglow
         side by side-
            such a fiery view!

Your red-gold beauty beckons to persuade
such bold and striking wonder tops my chart-
of all the lovely flowers God has made,
with petals marching round like on parade-

      Oh, lovely Ring of Fire-
         you
            mesmerize me so.


March 2, 2021

Contest: Fragments Of Verse
Sponsor: John Lawless

Three poems merged as one:

Sunflowers- Ring Of Fire - (Villanelle, June 12, 2016)
Yellow Lashes - (Haiku, August 23, 2020)
Sunflower - (Verse, May 10, 2020)
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win...................
Agustin Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 12:17 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent... exemplified through this piece. God bless you.
Ligon Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Beautiful, seamless blending of verses. The presentation is lovely as well. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 6:23 AM
In the parlance of a true Bostonian....this is WICKED PISSA.....which is a step above WICKED AWESOME....Great job weaving this wonderful poem together. The repetition was so smartly inserted that I didn't catch on the first reading..Great job Sandra
Daniel Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Sandra:) the lines merge beautifully:)
Dutta Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:35 PM
EXCELLENT. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Sunflower is also my favorite flower. Hugs.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:34 PM
This is such a spark of delight with seasoning of fiery warmth that draws out a beautiful and silent shower of glory on the page. I absolutely LOVE this. Brilliant, blessed, beautiful... always - God bless you always. CONGRATS on your top win. Love, Gina
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Sandra, this is very beautiful. I also am impressed by your format of this sweet poem. Well done! <3
Hankins Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 6:47 PM
This is a lovely piece of work, Sandra. I recognized some portions from your other poems. Nice job; well-written. Frankly, I think it is an outstanding example of Ekphrasis, as you discuss the flower like a work of art. I loved it!
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