My Favorite Dessert

Some may think it’s so bitter Quite the contrary As pie, it’s the tastiest Treat, like no other My stomach then smiles For rhubarb Pie!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 15, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Hello Michael, this is excellent. I really like the taste of pie, especially with ice cream. The form is 7/5/7/5/5/3/1/. You may want to double check the syllable count or use a syllable checker. Great job! ~Joseph
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March 11, 2009 at 12:27 PM
Michael, I haven't had rhubarb pie, but your great verse inspires me to try it! Like the way your stomach "smiles." I relate; mine smiles when I eat chocolate. Glad you have a happy tummy. Good work! Love, Carolyn
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March 6, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Cute and yummy write! I've never tried rhubarb pie either, but like Tyesha said, I just might have to now! hehe Very clever. :) Have a great weekend! Amy
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March 5, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Very sweet!! I have never tasted Rhubarb pie but the way you have described it, I just might try..Very cute!! My stomach smiles for anything sweet...God Bless*Tyesha
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March 5, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Tasty in season but needs plenty of sweetness.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments
Winter Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 6:22 AM
That's my dad's favorite! And I must agree it is so yummy! I LOVE the tart flavor. It is simply my favorite pie too (though it runs close with blueberry!) Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar
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March 5, 2009 at 6:11 AM
really cute!! ~ Arany
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