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My Favorite Dessert

Some may think it’s so bitter Quite the contrary As pie, it’s the tastiest Treat, like no other My stomach then smiles For rhubarb Pie!

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 3/15/2009 1:23:00 PM

Hello Michael, this is excellent. I really like the taste of pie, especially with ice cream. The form is 7/5/7/5/5/3/1/. You may want to double check the syllable count or use a syllable checker. Great job! ~Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/11/2009 12:27:00 PM

Michael, I haven't had rhubarb pie, but your great verse inspires me to try it! Like the way your stomach "smiles." I relate; mine smiles when I eat chocolate. Glad you have a happy tummy. Good work! Love, Carolyn

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/6/2009 6:49:00 AM

Cute and yummy write! I've never tried rhubarb pie either, but like Tyesha said, I just might have to now! hehe Very clever. :) Have a great weekend! Amy

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/5/2009 11:16:00 AM

Very sweet!! I have never tasted Rhubarb pie but the way you have described it, I just might try..Very cute!! My stomach smiles for anything sweet...God Bless*Tyesha

Brian Strand

Date: 3/5/2009 8:07:00 AM

Tasty in season but needs plenty of sweetness.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/5/2009 6:22:00 AM

That's my dad's favorite! And I must agree it is so yummy! I LOVE the tart flavor. It is simply my favorite pie too (though it runs close with blueberry!) Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/5/2009 6:11:00 AM

really cute!! ~ Arany