My Father Is Not What He Used To Be

My octogenarian father can no more walk the mile
His memory lurks behind his perpetual deceptive smile

He has hidden us in a chasm so deep
and cavernous, where no light ever does peep

A wise gentleman once, now is a hapless child
Easily pleased,angered,intimidated or beguiled

He looks at old family albums like a kaleidoscope
Amused by colors sans any warmth, cognizance or hope.

He is elated when I sometimes go over ‘ABCs’
And the accuracy and irony of his words oft lacerates me.

"K is for knowledge", he stealthily whispers
"Never to amass, make sure always to disperse!"

"D is for daughter, but friend who are you?
Please stay for dinner, won’t you!”


Written on 05/19/2016 for Brenda Chiri-Carroll's contest "A Father is"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Congrats Sara, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Roper Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Congratulations on your win,Sara.
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Much sadness here along with the love. Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce
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May 28, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Great rhymes and win.. Linda
Lawless Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Sara, it is never pleasant to watch someone slip away......before they slip away. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 12:53 PM
ohh, i am deeply saddened by this delicate write... so well conveyed with defined images, sara.. huggs
Chansarkar Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thanks for stopping by Nette!
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:45 PM
oh my, that last part. I know how you feel. My stepdad became this way. VERY sincere and heartfelt. I LOVE this one. SEVEN
Chansarkar Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Andrea appreciate your comments.
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