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My Fantasy Sister

A rewrite of the previous,,after reading it again the one before this,,, I felt it was sending the wrong message,,,,,,at first to me it was what I wanted to say about my make believe sister,,,,,,only that the lines I wrote, could be mis-construed to another meaning. She is a dream girl, sibling, I never had. Not to sexy, or even beautiful to see, She is not exactly good or even bad. She is just my fantasy, designed for me. Not to sexy, or even beautiful to see, She is mostly happy, hardly ever sad. She is just my fantasy, designed for me. She has no mother, not even a dad. She is mostly happy, hardly ever sad. Impossible you say, this could never be, She has no mother, not even a dad. A dream girl as my sister, oh gee. Impossible you say; this could never be. Though it is true, she is my abnormal fad. A dream girl as my sister, oh gee. What I always wanted, since I was a lad, Though it is true, she is my abnormal fad. She is not exactly good or even bad. What I always wanted, since I was a lad, She is a dream girl, sibling, I never had. By Cecil Hickman Written for Sponsor Paula Swanson Contest Name Pantoum

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Date: 12/14/2010 1:17:00 AM
Many congrats Cecil winning coveted HM in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Cecil in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in the cotest, Cecil! Enjoy! Love, audrey
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Date: 12/12/2010 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:45:00 AM
This is such a sweet pantoum about the sister you always wanted, Cecil. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 7:38:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest with this wonderful write and win my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of paula, cecil
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