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My Fantasy Love

My Fantasy Love I remember it like it was yesterday, that time when we first met, I saw you from across the room, a day I’ll never forget. Your well groomed hair and dapper dress, immediately caught my eye, With clouded vision, heart fast beating, I missed you walking by. I remember it like it was yesterday, that time when we first met, You asked me to dance and I said yes, nervous with palms of sweat. I felt like a young debutant, at her coming out ball, The only thing missing was the fancy white dress, complete with camisole. I remember it like it was yesterday, that time when we first met, You re-appeared out of nowhere, like a shadowed silhouette. A smile darned my face again, and I wanted to know your name, Then out of the blue, you presented me with a bouquet of candy canes. I remember it like it was yesterday, that time when we first met, I saw you from across the room, a day I’ll never forget. Its many years later now and the memories still remain, So cheers to you, My Fantasy Love, as I sip my pink champagne! Written © 12/6/15 Submitted for: Poetry contest First Love Sponsored By: Frank Herrern

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:13:00 PM
Sarita, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 1/27/2016 6:48:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 1/17/2016 3:52:00 PM
Amazing best loved poem landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 1/17/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara!!
Date: 1/14/2016 5:00:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Sarita.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 1/14/2016 10:59:00 AM
Much thanks Dr. Sharma.
Date: 1/13/2016 10:28:00 PM
Sarita,, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 1/14/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity to showcase my work!!!
Date: 12/11/2015 6:37:00 AM
Sarita, sweet and really cute. the imagery of candy canes as a bouquet is wow!! love it!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 12/11/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Olive!!
Date: 12/10/2015 3:55:00 PM
that was so cute. a bouquet of candy canes!!! This is indeed a fantasy and Christmasy love!!
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 12/11/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! Think about it, if you put two candy canes together with the curve sided by side, it makes a heart!
Date: 12/9/2015 8:47:00 AM
I love how you made use of the repeating lines, it was very effective.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 12/9/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate the compliment!
Date: 12/6/2015 12:22:00 PM
love the power of the repeated line and the beautiful imagery - a delightful write Sarita:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 12/6/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I was in my feelings as I wrote this one.

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