My Fantasy Future

My Fantasy Future

I wondered!
Holding the warm, steaming mug of coffee in my hand.
What surprises awaited me in
Poetry Soup Land.

I fantasized!
A future with impressive poetry writes.
But realized, that will never be,
It’s not me, and does not sit right.

I accepted!
My simplicity and that works best for me.
I took off that which shall never be, and took a walk to the shining sea!

I realized.
I was blessed each day of my
long life.
Most will never see my age, they think, being young are free from strife!

I experienced. 
More sorrows, pain, joys than
they will ever feel.
And thus keep my poetry forever, quite simple and real.

I lived.
Through the histories they pen
so eloquently about.
I choose….. the present to pen and shout about.

                      5/5/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 5/5/2023 5:54:00 PM
I wish I had penned this Poem, Pangie, I can relate to every line. Who else can we be but who we are? How fortunate are we to have lived for so long? I enjoyed reading this very much; thank you. Take care, Shirley
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 6:16:00 PM
Dear Shirley, I have received lovely praises for so many poems …However your very first line is the most powerful I ever read .. I WISH I HAD PENNED THIS Poem. Agree..to live this long is a gift. Let us be grateful Amazed, Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 11:38:00 AM
- The real one... is the best, Pangie :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:24:00 PM
These weekends come so fast, don’t they, Sunshine? I think we don’t realize how fast time shifts away.. I just wanted to take a moment to acknowledge you for the endless beauty you bring to poet-souls …here consistently. I’do my best to be myself. I will never chase comments just to get one Hugs, Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 11:01:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I like the way you see yourself. in the fantasy future. Hugs. /da/Darlene\xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2023 3:46:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, Yes I do respect you. Wow! Our friendship has grown. That is great! I would never play tag poetry. I love our mail to. Love you. /Darlene\ xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene. I always know you respect me. You are more than kind about my poetry. And it’s been five years of friendship. Awesome. SOME New folks are not like you! At all. I am disappointed in my poetry. I thought by now, I would be better…thanks fotr not p,aging tag poetry. How obnoxious. Love our mail. Love you, Pangie xxx
Date: 5/5/2023 9:12:00 AM
Amazingly accurate and balanced self-analysis there, P! I admire your ability to do this. (Couldn't come close, myself.) Excelsior! ~ Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/6/2023 8:41:00 PM
I'm with you, P! And I myself often write on Israel and AI. Time to focus on the dangers from the Chinese and Americanese as well! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:42:00 PM
Well, in all humility. This poem is me! What a terrific comment. I try to be more complex, witty or wise! It does not Work. Writing of things that effect out freedom does. Writing brutal truth does. Somebody better start writing about the killing of Israelis…The dangers of AI. The Chinese own far too much of USA .agricultural land ..I do recall the Shoah…I guess folks don’t realize they can be next.Why not? All the name calling and beatings of Conservatives as evil? Bad sign, my friend.
Date: 5/5/2023 9:03:00 AM
A wonderful write. Too bad we live so far apart. It would be nice if we/soupers could get together. Soups needs to have a convention every year or two. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 11:34:00 AM
Paula, I would prefer to meet a poet in the flesh! I don’t know why PS does not have ZOOM meetings,and if shy, one need not be on camera. But at least voices could be heard.. a few could read their poems. I am sure as Gershon said,,an avatar vs reality might be a shock for many of us. ZoOM is a way to go. Why don’t poets Facebook one another…Travel is expensive. And I would be attacked or stabbed by some poets here. They loathe me.)) I value my life too much. I know you understand that. I saw 6 pages once of hare comments about me. Wow~ Paula. I trust you, for sure. But some vicious folks here. I learned to not trust. People are not real! Last week, I had three vicious attacks on me in open post. I should have sent them to Admin.If this happens to you, notify Admin. He’s still here but cannot comment to me! So, not all are nice as you. I think people are using poem genarators also. I prefer an honest poem. Love be yours. Pangie
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/5/2023 9:14:00 AM
Hey, Paula! About that Soup Convention: Aren't you a bit leary of seeing how, ahem, 'unusual' your fellow poets are? (I am, anyway). ~ Just sayin'
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