My Family

my family tree - nurtured, supportive Banyan roots stay firm beneath Strong branches stretch out, colouring a billion leaves - and those billion lives. United we stand, not by blood… but loyalty. Vasudev Kutumb. 'Vasudev Kutumb', in Sanskrit, means 'The world is our family'. For the contest 'My Family' Sponsor: Marvin Celestial N/A

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Sanket Jain

Date: 2/11/2018 1:19:00 AM

Nice one. Your penned piece is nearer to my heart. It was a sheer joy to review your poem. Regards. Beauty of a poem means use of rhetorical devices. You too tried your hand in it. Good. Yes, I too had written a poem on my family. It is a bit different. Review Pari Style Poem to encourage me. Please subscribe 2 my YouTube Channel.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2017 9:20:00 AM

Revisiting this one for which you got screwed, dear. I truly love this one.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/1/2016 12:43:00 PM

This is so beautiful...vaah vaah! I learnt something new in your poem, those Sanskrit words. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2016 1:10:00 PM

sorry to see this one was not on the winners' list!! I still really like it a lot.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2016 3:46:00 PM

Lovely and clever, Sneha! Your creative mind outshines your age! Well done. // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/18/2016 12:12:00 PM

A profound and honorary poem about what family means, Sneha. "United we stand, not by blood... but loyalty" ... well said! I like what you have to say here.

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/18/2016 12:39:00 PM