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It is when the morning of that day shows that i realise lonely i shall be It is when he says take care my son and she says i love you son that i realise what is life without them It is when she looks at me & say 'I LOVE YOU' that i realise 'I LOVE HER MOR

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Date: 1/16/2014 9:17:00 AM
A very good first offering to the soup. A belated welcome.
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:58:00 PM
Patrick, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
Welcome to P/Soup Patrick.. from a fellow S/African :) This is a wonderful poem about the importance of family-- well written.
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Patrick Nigros
Date: 4/9/2013 10:13:00 PM
Thank you kim. Blessed day.