My Family

It is when the 
morning 
of that day shows 
that i 
realise lonely i shall 
be
It is when he says 
take 
care my son and she 
says i love you son 
that i 
realise what is life 
without them
It is when she looks 
at 
me & say 'I LOVE 
YOU' 
that i realise 'I LOVE 
HER MOR
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 9:17 AM
A very good first offering to the soup. A belated welcome.
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April 21, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Patrick, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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April 5, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Welcome to P/Soup Patrick.. from a fellow S/African :) This is a wonderful poem about the importance of family-- well written.
Nigros Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Thank you kim. Blessed day.
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