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My Fall

The sun doesn't love me no more He comes round less each day The way he hides away from me Makes me not want to play The darkness dims my heart It tends to make me sad I cant see why, I try to smile But end up getting mad The cold that creeps up to me And shivers me with fear I wrap up warm and tell myself “It's just that time of year” The stars in our one's absence Gives me a little hope A wondrous way to settle in To a sight that helps me cope

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Date: 1/31/2016 7:07:00 PM
JAMIE, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 11/12/2015 8:51:00 AM
Alot of strong emotion coming thru in this lovely poem - and yet you said it with simplicity - no fancy stuff, which I always prefer. Very nice Jamie!!
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