My Fall

The sun doesn't love me no more
He comes round less each day
The way he hides away from me
Makes me not want to play

The darkness dims my heart
It tends to make me sad
I cant see why, I try to smile
But end up getting mad

The cold that creeps up to me
And shivers me with fear
I wrap up warm and tell myself
“It's just that time of year”

The stars in our one's absence 
Gives me a little hope
A wondrous way to settle in
To a sight that helps me cope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:07 PM
JAMIE, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Hernan Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Alot of strong emotion coming thru in this lovely poem - and yet you said it with simplicity - no fancy stuff, which I always prefer. Very nice Jamie!!
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