Get Your Premium Membership

My Face, My Book

Count the wrinkles, count the lines Each one owns their place in time, Around my mouth see my smiles Measure them, I hope there's miles. On my forehead see my frowns Embedded there when times were down, Beneath my eyes you see the bags I'm at an age when some things sag. When I look at my reflection I have the vaguest recollection, That once my skin was taut and smooth Yet here it is, carved with grooves. Each of those though duly earned Through happy times or lessons learned, So if you know how to look Read my face... it is my book. Entry for The Metaphor of your Face Poetry Contest Sponsored by John lawless 10/12/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2020 6:21:00 PM
Yes, how truly touching this is, Gary..... Indeed, with acres of fake posted each moment, it's right there in our eyes.... Truth. Thank you, darling for this worth written message.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 9/30/2020 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid. :)
Date: 12/21/2019 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 12/21/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 12/18/2019 4:30:00 AM
For sure, every face and life are a book. People just need to chill-out and look. Great writing. Really enjoyable read.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 12/18/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)
Date: 12/11/2019 1:08:00 AM
Gary, this is just awesome!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 12/11/2019 5:26:00 AM
Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 12/10/2019 3:22:00 PM
Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Gary Smith
Date: 12/10/2019 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Gregory. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs