Notes About The Poem

Written February 5, 2017
Entered in Contest, July 7, 2023
"Kissed By The Passing Breeze of Awakening"
Sponsor, John Lawless


 

My Eyes Looked Up

I stood before your grave
mid whispers of the breeze,
and 'neath the midnight moon, 
observed the garden maze
of lovely leaves and blooms 
'round your eternal bed;
each faithful guardian 
supports your lifeless rest.

Then I looked up and saw, 
in clouds, 'neath moonlit sky,
an angel there above 
had signaled not to cry.
Your soul glowed in her arms
beneath soft wings of white.
My heart was filled with peace; 
to heaven you took flight.
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Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 4:58 PM
an ever present eulogy to life and its many images....Beautifully done Sandra
Raina Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Glad you are back....this poem is so well written with a nice flow of words.
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:23 PM
Thank you once again, Meenakshi. I appreciate your nice comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 6:31 AM
I really loved your entry Sandra. It flowed so beautifully and your message gives hope and peace. I would have had this beauty at the top. Congratulations my friend. 7 ; )
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your uplifting words, congrats and nice rating. I appreciate your support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Warrior Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Beautifully done Sandra...Congrats on your placement...all the best my friend...^WW^
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Thank you very much, ^WW^! Sandra
Sathasivam Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 3:56 AM
Excellent write with beautiful flow. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Dalei Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Very deep & emotional write. Well penned. A7...........//hugs
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 2:16 AM
very beautiful verse.. bless you and pray thing are going ok with you and your husband healing is progressing Hugs
Leiser Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 3:51 PM
This poem is so lovely and almost "other worldly" in it's expressions, Sandra. I know you are busy with your husband right now, and I hope he is recovering...I miss reading more of your poetry here. God bless :)
Daniel Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Hi Sandra, this is beautiful, congratulations on your win:) hope your husband is doing well...you both are in my prayers:)
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Lovely piece Sandra. Just had to check in on you, hope everything is good. I just hadn't seen you post in a couple of weeks...
May Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:23 AM
Beautiful write with a nice flow...
Polydoro Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Sandra!!!! I loved it dearly - congrats on your placement <3
Negron Flores Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the placement of the contest. An angel watchs your dear one.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 3:03 PM
You did an excellent job of using the words given. Good write. Congratulations.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Oh Sandra, your poem is beautiful and poignant! My favorite of the entries I've read so far...love it! L&B, Rhonda
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