Written February 5, 2017 Entered in Contest, July 7, 2023 "Kissed By The Passing Breeze of Awakening" Sponsor, John Lawless
I stood before your grave mid whispers of the breeze, and 'neath the midnight moon, observed the garden maze of lovely leaves and blooms 'round your eternal bed; each faithful guardian supports your lifeless rest. Then I looked up and saw, in clouds, 'neath moonlit sky, an angel there above had signaled not to cry. Your soul glowed in her arms beneath soft wings of white. My heart was filled with peace; to heaven you took flight.
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