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MY EYES

My eyes,
you traced the beauty of nature.
The starry sky and inky ocean,
smile of winter in the heavenly garden,
dancing of waterfall on the lap of hill
and kissing of butterfly with lips of lily.
You painted the alluring nature
in the canvas of my memory.
It refreshes my soul
and revives my heart.
My eyes,
you are lovely, you are smart.

My eyes,
You traced my childhood
with your experienced hand.
Sacrifice of my mother
and hardship of my dad.
Depth of their love
and length of their sorrow,
thickness of their sympathy
and width of their care.
My eyes,
You are cute, you are fair.

My eyes,
you age out books stepping with time.
My career holds what I need.
You created hopes
and enhanced expectations.
You make my avenue successful and vivid.
My dreams slept on rose petal bed.
I know, a good book is equal to 100 friends,
but a good friend is a complete library.
My eyes,
you are my friend, you are my diary.

My eyes,
you traced a queen
in a marriage party.
Now, she is my darling
she is my sweety.
I never forget that wonderful  night.
When you traced her sensation
and her jumping heart,
her tender lips
and her undressed beauty.
I was clean bold
with extreme delight.
My eyes,
you are spicy, you are naughty.

My eyes,
you are very clever.
You can speak more than tongue.
I know, you can't be wrong.
My anger is apple red,
my love is pearl white
and my pleasure is crystal bright.
When I am confused
you fly kingfisher flight.
My eyes,
you are my teacher, you are my guide.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/16/2017 2:40:00 PM
The depth of your creativity is simply magnificent. Very well done!!
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Date: 3/16/2017 2:39:00 PM
The depth of your creativity is simply magnificent. Very well done!!
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Date: 10/9/2016 7:52:00 PM
Oh, this is an amazing poem! Congratulations and thank you for sharing it!
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:08:00 AM
WOW!!! beautifully written poem on eyes!!! enjoyed reading :) you have captured the beautiful story of your life through the eyes in this poem, a 7! Kudos!!! Anu:)
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Date: 5/24/2016 5:17:00 AM
''A good book is worth''Library''Thank you thank you!!You have one he;; of a book!Jai
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Date: 5/9/2016 12:51:00 PM
Brilliant beyond words... An absolute 7 my friend
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Date: 5/1/2016 10:45:00 AM
Congrats Manmath for your wonderful poem expressing your feelings so nice.
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Date: 4/30/2016 2:47:00 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
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Date: 4/23/2016 5:19:00 PM
Big Congrats on POTW Manmath! Your poem is most deserving of the honor! : )
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Date: 4/22/2016 2:13:00 PM
Hi Mammoth: congratulations on a beautiful POTW.
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Date: 4/22/2016 8:32:00 AM
Lovely indeed, you have graced us with your words. Congrats
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:03:00 PM
Congrats on your POTW!
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank u.
Date: 4/18/2016 4:37:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank u Jan...........hugs.
Date: 4/18/2016 12:41:00 PM
True verse. I love it. Congrats on your POTW.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank u.................hugs.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank u.
Date: 4/17/2016 8:53:00 AM
Such a color detailed write, very well done and deserving of poem of the week:)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot................
Date: 4/17/2016 4:42:00 AM
Our pretty eyes add more expressions to ones life as it pay attention to every detail of emotion that accompanies it. 7 for this, a lovely assembly of your thoughts and feelings into this poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/19/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thank u for visiting my poem..............hugs
Date: 4/17/2016 12:27:00 AM
A beautiful write Manmath.
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Date: 4/16/2016 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful eyes.
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Date: 4/16/2016 5:00:00 AM
I agree with everyone ,it is simplistic beauty . very magnetic. nice job
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Date: 4/15/2016 4:26:00 PM
I am adding this gem to my favorite poetry list. Its creativity and originality is awesome and its message clear and true.A7
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/26/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thank u very much for considering my poem in ur fav list...........hugs.
Date: 4/15/2016 3:03:00 PM
This is the most amazing tribute to eyes I have ever read! A most beautiful poem you have created Manmath. #7 ; )
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Date: 4/15/2016 2:54:00 AM
your poem was beautiful and full of sight loved it
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/15/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thanks.....
Date: 4/14/2016 11:42:00 PM
Just beautiful... A great pleasure in reading...
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Date: 4/14/2016 10:28:00 PM
An excellent expression!! Loved the way you wrote it ...wishes - shaista
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Date: 4/14/2016 10:15:00 PM
My Eyes is a great poem! Keep writing. Feel free to check out my poems if you want.
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