My Eyes

Emission
of light rays from
the core of
my being,shows true
traits,treasures,
fear;lust and love
staring at nature`s good works.

Without them
I can`t behold,
pretty legs,
pleasant faces
and attacks
by wicked ones,
which have made me myopic.

CONTEST:"Special crown of my body-A whitney" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.
6-16-2012.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Olusegun, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Olusegun, congrats on your super win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:22 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Wonderful job with your poem. congrats on your win.
Tsiluma Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 1:25 PM
protection and pleasure...mmmh...both worthwhile functions no doubt. Congrats on your win Arowolo!
Poet Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Beautiful poem Olusegun!Congrats on your win!!
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:39 PM
myopic huh? , congrats on your win with this great entry
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:10 PM
You are right. Eyes are the windows of the soul they say and should top out as crowning jewel. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's "Crown" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:11 AM
well done. I like how you did your entry!
Wesley Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 6:54 PM
Eyes, the windows to the soul, I wish you well in the contest with this exprressive poetry my friend. :)
A   Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 4:34 PM
I like your verse..xox~pd
Britt Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 7:46 PM
This should make EVERYONE appreciate their eyes! Good luck in the contest, Olusequn <3
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