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My Extraordinary Journey

I am going to try again. The last time I tried to post here what I posted wasn't how it appeared on the site. I know you were having some upgrading going on. Hopefully this will work better . . . lost and alone I wandered the landscape was familiar to me in a surreal sense my steps took me into a strange door don’t ask me how but I knew this was an undisturbed place I reached for the door to discover its secret within my hand touched not the door for it evaporated leaving me inside feelings of a charming, but slightly untamed way like carnival candied apples I waited waited for the purity of the moment to speak to me this, I felt was the same feeling Adam of that garden of old must have felt a place where the unfamiliar was found not good enough oh, my eyes sought out a pre-adolescent child a stranger-child yet something stirred inside me his soft white hands beseeched me near with a naïve smile his piercing blue eyes showed no trace of anxiety I saw virtue in this dreamlike child UNSUPPORTED CODE you are there and I am here come play with me for I’m the innocence you were back then UNSUPPORTED CODE

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Date: 12/7/2014 9:41:00 AM
I wanted this one to continue, I felt you had more to say.
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