My Extended Version of '' My Condensed Prayer '' By Britt

She prays; gods halo again brightly creeping from underneath the shadowed covers of comfort. Slowly awakening her blissful HEArT re*collabrated and re*juvinated to start the day quietly tip-toed inside  her peaceful home. A plantation thats shown to be told,firmly planted is all she'll ever know, thank you god my almighty straight to the LION'S den's mouth, as her heart is poured out in extreme greatness. She announced her DOGS EYE is not in pain anymore. So Thank You god for you are my only GOD!!!! You've engaged this HEArT strongly SHAPPED, I do love me; and the WOMAN I have become. In these last few weeks she has learned GENUINE SOULS do care like you, as parents we will keep her fruitful n' clothed. She'll learn that LOVE IS: more powerful then anything imaginable as you have, you image this world through a precious eye;(my DOG) across the sky in colorful RAE'S of skittles I can taste the RAINBOW... COLLABRATING IN THE CLOUDS... Watching SUN~SET DAWN DOWN fast asleep holding on to those DREAMS along side my dog. Teaching everyone to LOVE with/out SELFishness, just against GRACE For her HEART Is BIGGER Than the UNIVERSE.... As she chooses FREE~WILL!!!!!!
WILLINGLY!!! I Know now her Entire FAMILY HouseHold is in good HEALTH, SAFEly hidden from DANGER N' HARM,and has had A Peacful nights rest beside the warm fire I will lay;as she closes her eyes during nights break.

I LOVE YOU GOD FOR ALL YOu DO N' SHOW!!!

Written by: Carma SWEETHEART; and
Ravonne Jus MAD (BRITTANY CALDWELL)

06-21-12.          Thank you BRITTANY for letting me do this I am truly honored*ENJOY!!! ;D
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Courtney Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:55 PM
I like it
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 10:37 PM
glad you liked it!!!! Thank You much for stopping by today. Blessings!!!
Britt Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:29 PM
OOOOOOH WOW! This was SoOoOo BEAUTIFUL, CARMA SWEETHEART!!!! I'm glad you went through with this! THIS turned out AMAZING! Thank you for keeping my family and me in your prayers! Stay Sweet <3
Britt Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 8:11 PM
I didn't even think about that OKAY I will :D
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Im glad thanx again;you can save it to go with yours!!!! ;9
Britt Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:45 PM
I was honored, too :)
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:37 PM
"YOU ARE MOST CERTAINLY WELCOME MY DEAR, I ENJOYED EVERY MINUTE RE-WRITING THIS FOR YOU... THANK-YOU FOR HAVING THE FAITH AND TRUST IN ME TO DO AN AMAZING JOB!! I WILL TREASURE IT ALWAYS..... I WAS TRULY HONORED!!! ;9
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 6:10 PM
This has a ethereal flow, that makes one ruminate upon life! I enjoyed this divine masterpiece!
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 6:30 PM
PROUD
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 6:28 PM
" thank you my dear Elliot, I was quit honored that Brittany let me re-wright from her's I am pleased you enjoyed this piece... For I am as well. ;D
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