My Experience Says

Believers’ paths are paved with God's own zeal;
we make mistakes; it's He who forges our steel.
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Kauffman Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Amen, Reason. God does indeed "forge our steel." Wonderful metaphor. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. So True. Have a great/blessed day..................
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:26 PM
This is really nice Reason. Congratulations on your 9th Place win in this premiere contest. Blessings xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:32 PM
Reverent, expressive couplet, Reason. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Hankins Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:18 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Reason. I want you to know that I am not generally drawn to religious lines, but this really caught my attention. It is so true, too! Congratulations!!!! Also, if you had gotten my name correct, it probably would have moved up a notch or two...I'm just kidding you! Good writing!!!
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