My Expectancy of New Life

I shought a beam 
      And u gave light sockdolager
glare of full brightness
      And gave a magic thunder
how the donative tolerate
      Alaborate aura
Hallucination of miraj
      And  garando of frost feasta?
No remain honey ford
and gave a pioneer cockcraw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:40 PM
nice to see this one again
A  Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:46 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU HERE 2016
Mohan Upadhyay Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Absolutely
Mohan Upadhyay Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 4:49 AM
I am trying to make down my feeling with your spur
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Madan, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Mohan Upadhyay Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Thanks
A   Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Madan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:02 PM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Madan ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Mohan Upadhyay Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Thank u
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace